2 Comments
User's avatar
Dian Parker's avatar

This one is dark, haunting, a deserted feeling…shivering.

Well done!

Daniel Carden Nemo's avatar

Thanks Dian, yes, pretty eerie. A few elements keep coming up throughout the book, here we have the horse again, the entanglement of temporal and spatial dimensions, the darkness, importantly, pounding INSIDE the wall of light, not ON the wall of light as it's erroneously been translated in the past. Etc, etc.