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Aurora's avatar

What a poem.

Thought to myself 'how have I never encountered this poem before?' - and then realised I had read it, in Robert Bly's translation, years back.

Just read the Bly translation again.

'But the painting there. It is a landscape that makes one feel peaceful even though the wheat is a golden storm.'

Carden Nemo translation:

But the painting. A landscape of quiet,

though the grain is a golden storm.

Ha!

Very happy to have this new translation where every grain is lit as if to waken...

Brendan's avatar

Thanks for the translation -- Language shouldn't separate us from the poetic voice that was Tranströmer's. Loved these lines -

But the painting. A landscape of quiet,

though the grain is a golden storm.

Blueweed sky and drifting clouds. Below them

in the yellow surge, a few white shirts sailing: harvesters—

they cast no shadows.

-- I caught my breath.

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